Opening 9

This opening was the one I found most interesting compared to all the others. I liked the subject which was being referred to in this opening; And in my opinion the way it was written and the detail given, makes the reader want to continue reading the story and  I found it very interesting. The writer was using simple words to describe the situation which I admire about this piece. I liked how they were all trying to talk to her at the same time and to teach her different things and how she started laughing because of that matter. Generally I found the topic and the choice of language of this story appealing compared to the other ones I read.